The percentage of overweight children in western socity has increased in recent years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.
overweight plays a harmful role in today's world. Obviously, overweight has a powerful influence on the way we think about health and its impact is often negative. Current study show that overweight has created certain unpleasant consequences for humanity. The present essay aims to discuss that the problem of overweight is very serious and it should be brought under control by taking specific measures.
There are several serious disadvantages to overweight. In the first place, overweight causes many diseases. An example may help clarify the point. overweight and obesity are associated with many heart diseases. In the second place, overweight is a social problem and sometimes because of obesity people experience a lot of stress. As an illustration, in many cases it has been observed that obese people are not able to do physical activity very well.
Notably, it is often suggested that one possible solution these days is that we should avoid consume unhealthy foods and especially fast foods. For one thing, avoiding unhealthy foods plays an important role in preventing overweight. For instance, in many countries, eating fatty foods and eating healthy foods help reduce appetite, which help prevent overweight. All in all, one of the important solution to reducing overweight and obesity is diet and diet control.
Another important solution is that we should encourage exercise and physical activity between children and adults. Doctor Anderson the head of sport department at Michigan university claims that exercise and physical activity impressive have a significant effect on prevent overweight and obesity. many obese people have been able to help lose weight with exercise and physical activity. The latest figures released by world health organization (W.H.O) show that about 60 percent of overweight in recent years has been due to decline in exercise and physical activity among people, especially children. In other words, low attention to exercise and physical activity has been most common cause of overweight and obesity in recent years.
In conclusion, it was stated that the problem of overweight is severely threatening the health and happiness of human being. Through careful planning, coöperation and education, we should take immediate action to neutralize the menacing effects of overweight. The hop is to make the word safer for future generation by monitoring overweight hazards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, for one thing, in many cases, in other words, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45866666667 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78650717247 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530666666667 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3831646368 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0454545455 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0454545455 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161021582356 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516985405715 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387833391608 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887521399568 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278302357819 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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