Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children.
childcare plays a vital role in today's world. childcare has an important part in physical and mental health. On the other hand, sometimes a wrong choice childcare center can very heavy damage to children. The present essay aims to discuss that the advantages of childcare by family members outweigh childcare centers.
it is often suggested that the care of children by family members is beneficial for two main reasons. For one thing, when family members care the children, they usually stay at home and as well as they less expose of viral diseases. For instance, the first year school, catch the various diseases in their school. Another things is that family members pay more attention to children than to childcare centers. As an illustration, as has been observed many times, children in childcare centers hurt by less attention to them.
By contrast, there are several serious disadvantages to family relationships to childcare by family members. In the first place, always family members are not available. An example may help clarify the point. sometimes, people far away from their family members. In the second place, perhaps family members for personal busy, cannot care of their children. All in all, always childcare by family members are not possible.
By comparing and contrasting the positive and negative aspects of childcare by family members, I believe that its upside is mor significant than its downside. To support my opening , I would like to offer two basic arguments. Firstly, Doctor Anderson the head of psychology department at Michigan university claims that childcare by family elders in addition to children is beneficial for themselves. In many traditional community, family elders have sense of health and happiness by responsibilities given to them. Te latest figures released by world health organization (W.H.O) show that about 50 percent of parents want that children care by family members. In other words, childcare by family members in most of time are secure.
To sum up, it has been observed that the importance of childcare cannot be ignored. However, the question is: can childcare by family members improve the health and happiness of children, in general? Only time will tell, but in the meantime, the role of family members for childcare has increased in recent years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, well, another thing, for instance, in addition, in general, as well as, for one thing, in other words, to sum up, in the first place, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21390374332 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71411127259 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3522399399 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.25 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29166666667 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303610366242 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935832026403 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573851693869 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186003355525 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420249744605 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.