Traffic control plays a vital role in today's world. Perspnal car taxes can traffic control to some extent. One the other hand, personal car taxes may put pressure on people how have to go to work with their own car. The present essay aims to discuss that the advantages of tax private car out weight its disadvantages.
It is often suggested that the private car taxes is beneficial for two main reasons. For one thing, personal car taxes make people less likely to use personal cars. For instance, people prefer to use public transport when using their car increase personal costs. Anothet things is that use private car but some people and tax to government help increase the quality of public transportation. As an illustration, in developed countries there are high quality public transportation because of individuals who use private car, tax to government.
By contrast, there are several serious disadvantages to use public transportation. In the first place, people cannot use public transport at certain times. An example may help clarify the point. In some celebration like a wedding, use public transport is very difficult. In the second place, at all hours of the day and night are not public transportation. All in all, some time the use of public transport is problematic.
By comparing and contrasting, the positive and negative aspect of the personal car taxes, I personally believe that its upside is mor significant than its down side. To support my position, I would like to offer two basic arguments. Firstly, Doctor Anderson the head of traffic management department at Michigan university claims that traffic has an important part in air polution. In crowded cities, air polution duo to traffic is high. The latest figures released by World traffic organization (W.T.O) reveal that about 60 percent of air polution creat by traffic. In other words, in some developed cities, traffic control has reduced the high level of air polution.
To sum up, it has been observed that the role of personal car tax for traffic control cannot be ignored. However, the question is: Can traffic control improve the health and happiness of mankind, in general? Only time will tell, but in the meantime, method of traffic control to move forward.
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...e not public transportation. All in all, some time the use of public transport is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, for instance, in general, for one thing, in other words, to sum up, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04010695187 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76865040964 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8463923912 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5416666667 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280652287401 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851932961676 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609198947492 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150981948247 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587846115095 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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