Pollution and environment damage result from developing and making the country richer.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Befoulment and neighborhood harm result to the economic development of the country. This essay will support this argument by how pollution and environmental damage have caused economic losses and human life in recent years.
In regard to live activities human, environmental pollution has played a part in this. First, by environment damage such as pollution water and pollution land, everyone, especially elders, seriously affects health. People need to provide enough water, but when pollution water leads to a shortage of clean water for drinking and living. Now, the area of cultivated land is increasingly shrinking due to environmental pollution and house construction. This clearly shows that environmental pollution causes a lot of economic damage. Second, environmental damage brings economic impact. Polluted environment, scarcity of clean water therapy of feting the economic, for example, aquaculture industrial crops, aquatic products do not have suitable environment to live, plants do not have water to grow.
Concerning the cost of water treatment, the impact that polluted water has had on our lives have clear disadvantages. First, it takes a lot of money as well as time to deal with the difficult or non-biodegradable waste that accumulates in the water and flows into the ocean. Polluted water or polluted land, for instance, has many plants can’t germinate as usual. In addition, when pollution, land can’t guarantee the solidity of the construction as well as the infrastructure invested and built. Second, it is hard to imagine how people now are able to monitor their health status when they inhale the dirty air from the factories. Not only do not develop country but also affect many other things in life when polluted.
In conclusion, through decades of environment damage, humans have received of its merits from environmental protection to healthcare, raising the quality of their lives or development country. Even through there will still be many hurdles in the future, I am firmly convinced that humankind can keep advancing and find a way to combat any problems encountered from pollution and environment damage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41071428571 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01195181593 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574404761905 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.344826844 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.941176471 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202893401335 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696702955823 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380178910724 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128039820012 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233935943676 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.