Pollution is becoming a major environment problem. What are the causes and solutions to solve this problem
Environmental pollution has been affecting the health of individuals in a deleterious manner.Despite the measures for control, it is a growing cause of concern. In order to combat this issue, the causative factors need to be scrutinised well, which will be put forth in the subsequent paragraphs followed by effective solutions.
Industrialization and technical advancements have been the major contributors to polluted atmosphere because they release hazardous elements directly into the air. The altered air composition substantially affects the respiratory system of human beings at a major level, as seen in Delhi, the capital of India. Although the industries cannot change the materials being used, the gaseous effluents can be treated well before discharging them into the surroundings.
Deforestation, on the other hand, is being done significantly for the new constructions of factories, residential societies and various other buildings. Not only air quality, water and soil pollution take a toll too due to the enormous amounts of soils being carried away by water bodies. The croplands lose their fertility, while the deposits of soil at riverbeds increase as a consequence observed in Shivalik foothills in Punjab. There is immediate need to monitor the clearing up of forests at a colossal level, meanwhile encouraging the afforestation programmes globally for controlling the pollution.
Hammering the last nail, saving the environment is a crucial requirement but it is a collaborative task requiring efforts of both public and authorities altogether. Even though the process is time taking, it will all be worth in the end if the stern actions are taken well in time.
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- These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events Do you think this is a positive or negative development 78
- It has become easier and more affordable for people to travel to other countries Do you think it is positive or a negative development Give your opinion and relevant example from your experience 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a deleterious manner" with adverb for "deleterious"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...een affecting the health of individuals in a deleterious manner.Despite the measures for control, it is...
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Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Despite
... of individuals in a deleterious manner.Despite the measures for control, it is a growi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53076923077 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29262219921 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676923076923 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 15.6580188312 49.4020404114 32% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 130.727272727 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0731458144467 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258516505248 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278585701997 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0427957538333 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237095867537 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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