From the beginning of the time, manking affected to Earth and its nature too much. Nowadays, water pollution as well as other types of pollution is one of the most serious concerns of 21st century. Water pollution has various deleterious effects on our community and animal life. The examination of the basis of this issue and its harmful effects are examined in this essay.
Firstly, the chief among the causes is the uncontrolled hazardous waste. Every year seas, lakes and rivers are hosting a great deal of tourists and visitors and when the people left the area they leave their wastes behind. Furthermore, sewer systems overflow is one of the main sources of water pollution. The discharge directly goes to the oceans or seas around the big residental areas. Moreover, industrial activites around the water bodies also pollutes them. For example, any leakage during carrying oil or storing it may pollute our water sources. Most of the plastic pollution in the ocean also comes from fishing boats, tankers and cargo shipping.
The most serious consequences are often felt, when the animals dies because of some plastics in their body. It seriously affects the number of rare and common species that live in the water. Correspondingly, the issue directly causes some disorders in food chain which affects the whole nature. Additionally, pollution in some touristic zones spoils its beauty and requires a lot of cleaning process for a great deal of financial resources.
Finally, the greatest effect of water pollution is lack of drinkable water. However, people in most of the countries do not feel the thirstiness yet, clean water can be as expensive as oil or gold in the future if the pollution sustains in the same or higher rate.
To conclude, rubbish and faecal water dumping is the main sources for water pollution. If we do not start doing something results will be extremely deleterious for nature as well as mankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01863354037 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59714984163 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.516040993 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0526315789 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9473684211 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52631578947 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264313997182 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775195341763 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599438202199 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140994415416 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057197241085 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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