Pop stars earn much more than classical music performers. Discuss both views and give your opinion ?
It is true that the question whether pop stars can earn much or classical music performers earn more money remains a source of controversy in the music field. While i accept that pop stars can earn much. However i would argue that classical music can also make a lot of money. For some of the following reasons Firstly it depends on their talents like beautiful voice and they know how to combine the good dance they’re performing. For example Mi Tam a famous Vietnamese Pop star,she has a lot of talent that stands out from other singers such as a good voice and she is very friendly with her fan so it make her popular overseas. That gives her more shows and she makes a lot of money from it. Besides, Tran Tien is one of the successful musician and singer in classical music. He is known for his talent when he composes music and sings very well. That makes him special and people will always remember him and he earns as much money as pop stars. Secondly luck is also a factor to help you become more famous because as long as they have one song hit, they will become famous in no time and there will be a lot of companies or managers who will invite you to work with them. Singers will be able to perform live on stage and earn a lot of money from those images
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...urce of controversy in the music field. While i accept that pop stars can earn much. ...
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: I
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Suggestion: some
...music can also make a lot of money. For some of the following reasons Firstly it depends on...
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...mple Mi Tam a famous Vietnamese Pop star,she has a lot of talent that stands out fro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26141078838 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12330588592 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564315352697 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7141717417 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3636363636 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239093521968 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108746547493 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106165740133 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239093521968 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 12.4159519038 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.