Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Sports events are held almost every year in various part of our big planet. They are usually surrounded by huge expectations, bright emotions and a desire of people all over the world to be a part of them. It is believed that such occasions not only make sports lovers a bit happier, but also join and unite the whole nations. I can consider myself as one of these people, since I fundamentally agree that positive effects of such events rather than negative ones.
To begin with, the fact that sports competitions are usually held in different countries and continents makes people travel a lot and get a knowledge about other nationalities. Being a part of new countries, sharing traditions, languages, cuisine and habits gives an excellent opportunity for everyone to become closer to people from other side of the Earth. Undoubtely, it all brings new friends and emotions and makes people closer to each other which, consequently, leads to improvements in international relations.
Additionally, the main purpose of typical worldwide sports event is to unite people. It seems to me that this objective is always fulfilled. During such events even sports non-lovers become devoted patriots and fans.People unite when they support, for instance, a football team. It does not matter what your homecountry is: you are a great supporter with millions of people from ther continents who share your sports views and preferences. It, obviously, pulls nations together.
All in all, I feel like sports occasions are unique chances of uniting even conflicting countries. The common interests and sporting opinions, in my personal view, unite inhabitants of completely different nations and contribute to strengthening of international tensions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, then, for instance, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31046931408 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95955348797 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638989169675 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.953717696 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.071428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189842927494 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058290713833 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025753705595 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106948490387 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0140188278209 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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