At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively larger number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, in certain countries there are growing masses of young population as compared to older one. It is agreed that this phenomenon is more advantageous to these countries than being a negative trend. Analysis of both sides of this trend will be given followed by a reasonable conclusion.
On one hand, many believe that an integral disadvantage in a hugely younger population is the increased unemployment. This is because the young individuals tend to be more motivated to work and acquire additive skills, which create competitions between job applicants as the employers chose the most talented person for the job. If there are too many young competent individuals and few job vacancies, there will be many people heavily to get a job. It is true, however, such large communities usually have active job markets and many people will take the chance to do something for living.
On the other hand, it is obvious to me that the younger nations have many merits in contrast to older population. On one side, Young people are often more productive in term of work. They tend more to help their countries as they have the body fitness and power to do heavy working as well as have the essential motivation to learn skills and jump farther in the job ladder. On the other side, as well as being losing the power and motivation, older people might cost the health budget heavily. They are suffering from age illnesses that need funding to the hospitals and health care more than the funds lost on the younger. For instance, the NHS is losing almost double amount of money on geriatrics annually.
In conclusion, there are opposing views regarding the increased percentage of younger people in some countries. While some people believe that such tend will increase the redundancy, I think younger nations are more work productive in contrast to the older populations that cost heavily for health care.
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Suggestion:
...mount of money on geriatrics annually. In conclusion, there are opposing views ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95950155763 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63142344003 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517133956386 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0296556734 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120894525164 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474104082767 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462883368705 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864663423773 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483932032251 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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