At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
In this modern epoch, where population is boosting day by day there are more number of adults as compared to aged people. This essay will outline some of the advantages and disadvantages that is this a good trend for any country.
Admittedly, there are numerous advantages if a nation have large number of adults. This will lead to a rapid development in that country. Firstly, young adults are very energetic as compared to older ones so they can boost the economy of a country. Secondly, young people have more innovative ideas than aged ones hence they can apply those ideas in the field of science and technology which is vital part of any nation. Thirdly, old people cannot adapt the changes in their lives whereas young adults can do. To illustrate this, the country like USA were there more young people who are energetic as well as they have innovative ideas so, that country has developed in a great speed. Henceforth, it is very beneficial if the nation have more young people.
On the other flip side of the coin, it very important to have old people in nation because they are the ones who guides in a right direction. Older people have great experience which makes them to do less mistakes in any field. Furthermore, they have better decision making power and taking risk which seeks in young people because they are not so experienced. For instance, in a family everyone choose to take guidelines because they belive that old people will give them good and better advice and they will also lead them in a right track. Therfore, it is very essential for every country to have old people as they will guide in a right path.
In conclusion, I deem that, the advantages of a nation having more young adults overshine the disadvantages. The nation would need bolster of both adults as well as older ones as they both patronize nation to develop in all aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71124620061 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44091305846 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471124620061 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.957820342 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.875 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167164352791 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712709801485 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626324405282 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123361138065 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861440920166 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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