It is undeniable that population structure is one of the keys influencing the development of a nation since it involves such factors as the labor market, education and welfare system. In some countries, there is a fact that the number of young citizens are considerately larger than the figure for their older counterparts. While I accept that this phenomenon may bring about several drawbacks, I believe that its advantages are more significant.
To begin with, there are a number of explanations why the positive impacts of having a youthful population outweigh their downsides. From an economic perspective, this situation leads to the reduction of the financial burden of governments by lowering the expense for welfare benefits. To be more specific, there would be less elderly people who have to live alone in the final years of their lives, and rely on social securities to pay for their living costs. Instead, their children will be mainly responsible for taking care of them when they are no longer able to work. Another reason is that the overwhelming number of individuals in the young generation could help to avoid the risk of the lack of people entering the workforce, which is currently a huge concern in plenty of nations, such as Japan and many European countries. Furthermore, young inhabitants have less old age-associated illness leading them to work more and maintain them-self more active. Thus, they can contribute to the economy of the country, making money instead of spending.
Numerous people hold the opinion that a young population is a negative development because of some reasons. They may argue that the unbalance between the number of residents in young adults and older age groups can make the status of national unemployment more serious since there will be not enough jobs for all individuals. However, that issue is mainly caused by the ineffective division of labor of governments, and the disqualification of candidates as the shortage of employees has been posing a huge challenge to companies, especially start-up businesses. Additionally, if the number of residents in young age groups accounts for a major proportion of the total population in a country, it can be a burden for the educational sector due to the fact that the capability of the educational system is limited. A lot of adolescents may have fewer chance to be well-educated, which is one of the explanations for social problems. In fact, nonetheless, authorities always make efforts to encourage their citizens to complete at least general education programs by introducing financial support, for example, whereas the lack of awareness of some people prevents themselves or even their children from going to schools.
In conclusion, everything has two sides and a youthful population is not an exception. Nevertheless, it seems to me that the negative demerits of this phenomenon is outweighed by its merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, thus, well, whereas, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2453.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 472.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19703389831 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05843497985 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527542372881 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 780.3 506.74238477 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4855448233 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.277777778 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2222222222 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192172013531 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598462668919 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052631306475 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116503589948 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251801084948 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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