It is undoubted that the environment plays an essential part in human’s life since it provides us with most resources of living and directly influences our habitat. These days, however, an enormous number of environmental issues have been taking place on our planet which have negative impacts. While someone believes that the biggest problem is the extinction of certain creatures, I agree with those who argue that other environmental problems are more considerable.
On one hand, there are numerous reasons why the disappearance of particular fauna and flora is one of the most serious threats to our environment. Each species has its own role in the food chain since the loss of a kind of plants or animals can significantly affect the food source of other creatures. For instance, if predatory animals such as tigers and lions which are at the top of the food chain become extinct, it will lead to an uncontrollable rose in the number of herbivores. Unfortunately, this development will be harmful to the agriculture industry since such animals may find food outside their location and eat farm’s products due to the shortage of food in their natural habitat. This will cause scarcity of foods all over the world.
On the other hand, I suppose that other environmental problems such as climate change pose a huger challenge. Due to environmental pollution and the effect of greenhouse gas emission, global warming becomes more dangerous. Polar ice is gradually melting, which threatens that sea levels will markedly rise. As a result, many coastal areas are facing the danger of being submerged to the ocean. Climate change is also one of the major factors of more frequent occurrences of natural disasters such as flooding and droughts, which detrimentally affect food production. In addition, another problem is the influence on both human and other creatures’ health. Several forms of birds can no longer survive in certain high-polluted urban areas as well as residents living in such regions are facing numerous health problems such as cancer and allergy. Obviously, climate change is a more important concern than the extinction of wildlife as the latter is just a consequence of the former.
In conclusion, the loss of biodiversity is certainly a grave issue. However, climate change and its associated problems are more dangerous since they can threaten the existence of life on Earth.
- Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future Others by contrast are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than h 78
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organization Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 73
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together Do you agree or disagree 78
- Technology companies are gathering users private information for many purposes What problems does this trend cause and what could be done to solve them 89
- With all the troubles in the world today money spent on space exploration is a complete waste The money could be better spent on other things To what extent do you agree or disagree 95
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...ost serious threats to our environment. Each species has its own role in the food ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17391304348 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89190577772 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557544757033 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.99522982 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.388888889 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7222222222 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215558193317 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646051800418 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577229570482 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123171206823 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323424779769 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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