At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
A wide range of population gap between younger and older population is noted in some nations. Proportion of young adults is significantly high compared to the older population. Although it is serving the country as a whole by providing more earning hands, people are seen neglecting their morals and ethical values. Thus, it has less benefits compared to the disadvantages.
To embark upon, more younger the population, more will be the enthusiasm and energy in the nations people towards work. Adults are more capable of performing ultra-challenging tasks required by the demanding jobs which in turn hike the literacy and the employment rates. As an example, USA with high employment rates and opportunities is termed as a developes country on global scale. Thus, younger population has an imperative role towards globalisation which is the greatest benefit.
On the other hand, rates of older population are dwindling at an alarming rate in certain countries. Due to this, children and adults are getting detached from ethical values, culture and morals which they used to acquire from their grandparents. To illustrate, a recent study in India has reported that children nowadays lack basic morals and knowledge about their culture compared to those who once stayed with their grandparents. Therefore, growing as an adult they are proving out to be a social disdain.
To reciprocate, the proportion of older people compared to young adults is far more less in some states. Despite more young blood is available to surge the economy of a country, people are disconnecting from their roots. In my opinion, advantages of this situation is less compared to the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 330, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun benefits is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...morals and ethical values. Thus, it has less benefits compared to the disadvantages....
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Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'younger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: younger
... the disadvantages. To embark upon, more younger the population, more will be the enthus...
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Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'less' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: less
... people compared to young adults is far more less in some states. Despite more young bloo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26394052045 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98076826974 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539033457249 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1161779932 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161947330386 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606337169056 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536929913218 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107357648668 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542404597843 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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