“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating disease is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures.
To what extent do you agree.
From biological factor in our world, disease are indispensable for us. however, someone believe that jurisdiction should invest in a preventative rather than a cure in case of economic reasons. this essay will describe both View and give my own opinion why I strongly believe in a contrary argument.
having said it is true. When People Unite, every crisis cannot harm us. to be specific if all citizens prevent themselves, when the spreading of disease begins, there will be no deaths or injuries occurring. for instance, self-isolation in the houses at the same time, nobody are outside, can decline the rate of pandemic as well. moreover, in order to research and invent an efficient cure may take a long period,Therefore instead of unpredictable research, government should spend all money on prevention methods.
nevertheless, one of the main reasons, why the research is significant method as well as protection, if we cannot know when the spreading will reactive and starts to be the pendamic again. whereas we have a potential to fight it back with a medical supplies or a vaccination, the world will be Safed. Furthermore, only ideal society which people can be United; it's well-known that human have a variety of notions and behaviors, hence nobody be able to control all people in the regulation.
in the final analysis, although there are some possible reasons to think that preventative restriction should be invested more than cure, I extremely disagree with this statement.
- Prevention is better than cure Researching and treating disease is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures To what extent do you agree 56
- Prevention is better than cure Researching and treating disease is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures To what extent do you agree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14814814815 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99847263077 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658436213992 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6228470171 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182339386952 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060615239309 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623995558483 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115643702606 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363253675163 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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