“Prevention is better than cure” researching and treating disease is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measure. To what extent do you agree?
It is generally argued among the most of the people that, treating up on the disease is more expensive and people therefore focused on health percussion. This essay agrees that, people should be conscious on preventive measure than the treatment. Firstly, this essay discuss the fact that, following on the regular exercise and hygienic food habit play the significant role to make their body fit and secondly, discuss on timely health checkup for avoiding high cost during serious treatment.
With regards to the positive concern, people should follow the hygienic food habit and regular exercise make their body on more healthy status. Moreover, it allow individual to avoid obesity and fulfill the required calories as per the need of their body. On top up that, keep following on good schedule help person to develop their immunity system more strongly along with tighter the muscles for better health prospective. For example, this is most evident in my country that, youth nowadays are healthier than old people just because of their regular effort on yoga, gym and avoiding junk food as well.
On the other hand, getting health updates from the authorized health center on timely basis also helps people to avoid serious health problem. It allows people to know if any disorder or disbalanced occurrence or possibility of being inflected from any kind of diseases. As a result of that, they can get advice from the medical doctors immediately and avoid to happen of any kind of serious health issue. For instance, a recent study of 2019, conducted by “Ministry of Health, Nepal” found that treatment level of major diseases like heart, cancer rate were decreased by 70 % in comparison to 2016 report.
In conclusion, keep focusing on the health habit related to regular workout and timely health checkup allows people to pay more attention in regards to maintain their body out of any kind of costly disease. I personally think that, it is always good to be live healthier life than running out to the hospitals frequently for expensive health care.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'allows'?
Suggestion: allows
...dy on more healthy status. Moreover, it allow individual to avoid obesity and fulfill...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid happening'.
Suggestion: avoid happening
...rom the medical doctors immediately and avoid to happen of any kind of serious health issue. Fo...
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Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...kup allows people to pay more attention in regards to maintain their body out of any kind of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07331378299 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5198504013 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554252199413 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.2238800215 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.076923077 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0868193381658 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359636680788 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440410785254 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0546655567213 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244741613414 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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