Across all over the world health related issues are becoming increasingly popular. It is widely believed that a large proportion of the health budget should be introduced in order to raise awareness among the community to prevent detrimental health issues. In this essay, I will discuss this topic with valid reasons why I agree with this statement.
It is globally believed that a large proportion of the health budget should be introduced in order to provide health education as well as actions to avoid health issues. There are two main reasons why I strongly support. Firstly, During rainy season lots of water being accumulated in drains. which produced dangerous mosquitoes. Which cause an epidemic of disease such as fever, malaria, dengue, etc. Such disease mostly tends to deteriorate the human condition. To cure such disease needs expensive medicines and doctor treatments. These expensive medicines and doctor fees cannot affordable for poorer. Hence here question raise of their life expectancy. This is because it is better to take advance action to avoid such health-related issues. The good illustration of this that the government can make a policy of giving free seminars including information to prevent dangerous disease.
Another important reason is obesity among the younger age group. The main reason behind is that lack of education respective nutrition and a healthy diet. Nowadays, children are attracting towards unhealthy junk food, Which mostly contains bad carbohydrate and saturated fat which makes them obese and culminating to health issues like diabetes, blood pressure, heart attack and so on. The only solution to this dilemma is that providing education in school about nutritional values of each food as well as a daily recommendation of that each nutrient in our diet. The fit younger generation will make the next generation would be healthier at the same time health conscious. Thereby the number of health- related issues will gradually diminish.
To put in a nutshell, In my opinion, It is better to take advance action to deprive health-related issues rather than repair the damage. Moreover, Government should make health budget regarding health education and prevention measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36857142857 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77734420199 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574285714286 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2177863772 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4090909091 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247938739577 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665362213596 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967970389143 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17510551644 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707182517612 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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