It is believed that prison is the singlehanded form of punishment because it make criminals live separately from the society. I strongly agree with this idea because of several factors. This essay will explain the reasons why prison can be the only one solution to treat criminals.
Criminals should pay their crimes though living in prison as the consequence before they release back to the society. In my point of view, prison is the only effective form of punishment because it is not only make they realize their mistakes but also help them learning many skills. In prisons, there are many programs offered by the government to train the prisoners with many skills like carpentry, cooking, garments, etc. Hence, they will be learn something new that can be utilized to make money or to look for jobs when they released to the public.
Despite of the skills, the other positive thing that can be gained during living in prisons is psychological consultation that can help prisoners be a better human. The result of a study conducted in the USA reported that prisoners who received psychology counseling during their punishment would more likely to have better behavior and not committing any crimes again when the went back to the social environment. Therefore, prison is not about something scary but more to the rehabilitation place for criminals.
To sum up, prison is the most effective form of punishment for criminals because it is not only make them give up committing crime but also train them with many good skills and convert them to a better human that can live a normal life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...glehanded form of punishment because it make criminals live separately from the soci...
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Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to learn' or 'learn'.
Suggestion: to learn; learn
...alize their mistakes but also help them learning many skills. In prisons, there are many...
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Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tter human that can live a normal life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, therefore, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60640763661 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52962962963 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1218035186 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.090909091 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184582011994 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807496477125 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550282658261 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128107837896 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560678744026 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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