Public celebrations (national days, festivals) are held in many countries. Some people say that these celebrations are a waste of money and we should spend money on more important things. Do you agree or disagree?
there are many different views about many countries use too much public expenditure on national occasions. While I agree this activity is necessary and therefore can be considered and acceptable, I also believe governments and individuals are spending a significant amount of money on those celebrations.
There are several reasons why countries should hold public celebrations. This is a great way to preserve the culture of a nation. To illustrate, lunar new year is an important part of Vietnamese culture Many activities will be took place during the celebration in order to remember heroes who had contributed to nation’s peace. Holding celebrations for these occasions is necessary to remind the younger generations of this tradition. Secondly, this is also an occasion for people to gather and reunion and show their unite spirits. Since these occasions are usually the only times for family members to have time and enjoy together, it is understandable that people want to spend money on what makes them happy.
However, it is wrong to reject the argument in favor of reducing money spend on celebrations. First of all, take place these celebrations activities might take a proportion of national budget money. For example, much money is being paid for fireworks on new year’s eve in many countries around the world. National budgets cannot have ability to afford all of these expense. Emergence problems like education, unemployment and other problems will not be solved. So instead of pouring money too much on spirit activities, the government should also more concern about other problems and consider cautiously.
In conclusion, it is ludicrous to compare spending on celebrations and other issues like education and unemployment because they are equally important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38434163701 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99965170658 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590747330961 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6325242645 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.866666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261761776651 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810833191153 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381876676618 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148319746746 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428837915023 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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