With the proliferation of high-tech media, some people insist that the public libraries would be rendered obsolete if they did not provide software, videos or DVDs to their users while others assert that it is only a waste of limited resources and libraries should offer only books.
In the past, libraries play a role of providing hundreds and thousands of books, magazines, and collections for users to borrow and return and sometimes even donate. A good library service their users for a range of books from best-sells to historical collections as long as people are still reading it.
Nowadays, libraries are improved in many ways including the speed of organizing the collections, providing chargers on the desk, and start to provide virtual media such as e-books. Indeed, the way people read changes over time from a touchable books to high-tech devices like smart phones, tablets, and laptops.
As a result, the visual content growing rapidly while publishing industry shrinking dramatically. For the need of end service like bookshops or libraries are changing as well. On the other hand, people need the up-to-date equipment and services more than the past. And the idea of invest limited resources into the high-tech media is the inevasible trend.
To sum up, reading is just a way people absorb knowledge either from traditional books or virtual devices. Technology changes the way we read, the libraries should be adjusted with the custom as well. And the money spending on improving the libraries, will never be a waste!
- Public libraries should only provide books and should not waste their limited resources on expensive hi-tech media such as software, videos, DVDs. Do you agree or disagree? 67
- In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.What are your opinions on this? 67
- Cycling has many benefits, yet in some countries there is a decrease in the number of people using bicycles as their main form of transportation. Why is it happening? Give suggestions how to encourage people to use bicycles again. 67
- Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of nation's history. However, some people think old buildings should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices.How important is t to maintain old buildings 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'book'?
Suggestion: book
...read changes over time from a touchable books to high-tech devices like smart phones,...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'while', 'such as', 'as a result', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275985663082 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.139784946237 0.155533422707 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0824372759857 0.0946595960268 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0609318996416 0.0501214627716 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0215053763441 0.0437548338989 49% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121863799283 0.122226691241 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0465949820789 0.0403226058552 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67771173887 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0215053763441 0.0326793684256 66% => OK
Particles: 0.00358422939068 0.00163938923432 219% => OK
Determiners: 0.10394265233 0.0861772015684 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0143369175627 0.021408717616 67% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1543.0 1933.35771543 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 316.048096192 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14741035857 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.390438247012 0.374742101984 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.294820717131 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.211155378486 0.203846283523 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155378486056 0.137316102897 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67771173887 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.037074148 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589641434263 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 60.5175103773 60.7387585426 100% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9166666667 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1452826866 49.517814964 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.583333333 127.492653851 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.814263465372 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 50.3987383798 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.69124875643 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246637601455 0.332605444948 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108263737087 0.102741220458 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0577439113303 0.0668466124924 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.639360318354 0.534860350844 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151028817486 0.148594505496 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104107484808 0.134430193775 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826510919656 0.0742795772207 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.336490112249 0.324371583561 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0742430079324 0.0638462369009 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169397280964 0.228012699653 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09473518943 0.058150111329 163% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.