Recently more debates on various social issues based on morality occur, especially people argue about the necessity of the death penalty. Some individuals opine that murderers should be punished according to their crime, therefore, they are convinced that the death penalty for such criminals is appropriate. However, I strongly disagree with that point of view since all factors of commited murder should be considered and in case of such cruel penalty society is also responsible for it.
First of all, by punishing murderers with the death penalty, people question the true value of life. For example, if a person killed someone and have got such a punishment, the insignificance of other life deems to be among the society. In other word, how could people, who are ready to take a life of another one, - even if brutal crime has been done by them, - decide what kind of penalty ought to be given to criminals, if they themselves do not truly cherish the gravity of life. Furthermore, commited crimes vary in their difficulty, in some cases, they could be done in unconsciousness or unpurposely. Therefore, fair punishment taken with a consideration of all reasons and circumstances should be made. Thus, it is impossible to justify the crime if only one kind of punishment might be.
Likewise, more suitable penalties exist, take for instance a prison. Such institutions aim to change a person by making him experience a stark opposite of living in freedom. Moreover, prisoners may help the government and even other people may benefit from it. For example, specially dedicated for public works hours or paying murderers for stirring job that is unwillingly done by ordinary people such as working in fabric and other mundane and simple occupation. After a duration of prisonning, criminals will have chance to change their lives, which is considered as humanity by the majority of people.
Altogether,I believe that penalty should be given according to the difficulty of crime, however, not the same as it. Since it is a question of morality, a murder of a criminal could not be deemed as a punishment. In addition, in my opinion, a prison is better one for both society and a criminal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00821917808 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86220295368 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553424657534 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5952906125 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.529411765 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8823529412 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259917054297 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834031170592 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787945393769 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156915058687 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680245755533 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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