Q:- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is a constant dilemma among people about dealing with issues in their life. While a group of people opine that accepting an awful situation namely dearth of finances or dissatisfaction with a job is the only way to deal with them, others thought that one ought to put efforts to make things better. One can delve into both sides and in my opinion, working had for improvements is always superior than living in unpleasant conditions.
On one hand, it is not wrong for people to think that only method to deal with unsatisfactory circumstances is to start accepting it. The reason for this belief is that when they start to revolt than people may lose whatever they have in hand. To exemplify, if an employee complains the superior regarding the longer working hour or less remuneration than there is a chance that employer may get offended and throw the staff away from the job. In addition, keeping oneself content with the situation prevents development of stress and one finds methods to live with whatever they have. A person, who is poor, will never dream of having a car ,rather would prefer to travel by public transport so that he can save money for future. By doing this one can live a happy life. But is it justifiable to do so?
On the other hand, there are persons who believe one should always struggle hard for betterment of the state. A Person, who is unsatisfied with the job, ought to apply in various company until he finds the suitable employment. In this way, one can keep themselves motivated .Even a small success will give them tremendious pleasure which will offer enough courage, needed to fight with problems. Also, without trying how will one know whether their efforts are worth or not. They may lose myriads of opportunities if they don't identify them and put efforts to achieve success.
In conclusion, people may vary in their opinion, but according to my belief , it is significant to put profound efforts for betterment of situation to keep oneself encouraged and grab opportunities which can provide success in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 403, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...had for improvements is always superior than living in unpleasant conditions. On ...
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Line 3, column 642, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s poor, will never dream of having a car ,rather would prefer to travel by public ...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s way, one can keep themselves motivated .Even a small success will give them trem...
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Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Even
...way, one can keep themselves motivated .Even a small success will give them tremendi...
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Line 5, column 522, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay lose myriads of opportunities if they dont identify them and put efforts to ac...
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Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... lose myriads of opportunities if they dont identify them and put efforts to achiev...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...heir opinion, but according to my belief , it is significant to put profound effor...
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Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...opportunities which can provide success in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82816901408 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62123055838 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554929577465 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2360746652 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.125 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116013883585 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379999691411 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344242930987 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776661704247 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316151409411 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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