Q1. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living a number of different places during your childhood years?
Besides that the kids living only place in their childhood, there are so many children living in a different places during thier childhood. In this essay i will examine the benefit and drawbacks of this situation.
Living in the numerous places during their childhood period, is one of the motivation that have that kid gain more experience in future. It is clear that, moving to many places have them more understand the culture form the local where they live at. Find out and comparing the culture from places, that they had to going through. In envidence show that the older have a sentence: ‘ travel boradens mind’. More over , not only have more relationship with new friends but also have them open mind with unexpected problems in thier life, supporting their thinking maturely because they have expriece . Therefore, living in the diffrent places have children take more experiene and abilities.
However, in my opion, they will lacks of emotion from their childhood is the most important for the drawbacks. Make it clear, comparing with the child who live only place during their childhood, they obtained more close relationship than the onces. The kids living a numerous places have no impressed by their childhood. In other problem such as the mental of kids. For instance the introvert child and extrovert. Firstly is extrovert, the kids who belong to this groups will be easy and they can pass away. However, the kids who belong to other groups if not preparing carefully form their parents, Children will takes the mental illness related.
In conclusion, due to globalization many parents have work in many places to following the update of society. However, take care their child is one of the most important to their development. Because everythings exits the benifical and ditrimental effect and this statement are same.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'place'?
Suggestion: place
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...that have that kid gain more experience in future. It is clear that, moving to many plac...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n more experience in future. It is clear that, moving to many places have them mo...
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Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
...s have them more understand the culture form the local where they live at. Find out ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...king maturely because they have expriece . Therefore, living in the diffrent place...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lack'
Suggestion: lack
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Suggestion: place
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...fully form their parents, Children will takes the mental illness related. In concl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08881578947 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54307375917 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3097102953 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9444444444 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163913405714 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612394815749 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915839117129 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12404807002 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859627788792 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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