Migrating to another countries has became a trend nowadays. Although working abroad brings you a lot of benefits, not able to speak the local language of that country can sometimes lead to dire consequences, socially as well as practically. I agree with this statement upto a major extent and the reasons behind my broad agreement and limited disagreement will be discussed in this essay.
One of the problems that can rise under these circumstances is offending the local culture unintentionally. A foreigner might not know what things are allowed in a certain community and what not, especially while verbally communicating with someone and this can be a stumbling block in the process of setting abroad. Moreover, a person might feel difficult to interact with the people, which can make a person feel alienated from the society. This can lead to the development of inferiority complex inside a foreigner's heart, which will make the situations more worse.
Furthermore, getting a job becomes an arduous task whether or not a person speak their language. A person might feel gruelling even to get some basic services such as cleaning of the home, plumbing the taps, laundary etcetera. For example, reading a menu at hotel seems convulated. A person might order something he can not eat and end up wasting his money instead.
To conclude, staying in a country where a person cannot speak or understand its language comes up with numerous difficulties. Despite all the obstacles, it gives a person lot of challenges and chances to know about different cultures. With some consistency in making efforts to understand their people, a person can overcome those problems. Sometimes, language barriers fall when people communicate with humanity which can remove all the difficulties as well.
- It is important for people to take risks both in their professional lives and their personal lives Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages 73
- In the future all cars buses and trucks will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages 78
- Nowadays some older people choose to live in retirement communities and centers with other people rather than living with their adult children Is this a positive or negative development 89
- The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones why Do you think this is a positive or negative trend 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
Migrating to another countries has became a trend nowadays. Although working abro...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 509, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'foreigners'' or 'foreigner's'?
Suggestion: foreigners'; foreigner's
...lopment of inferiority complex inside a foreigners heart, which will make the situations m...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 558, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
...s heart, which will make the situations more worse. Furthermore, getting a job becomes...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 52, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
..., getting a job becomes an arduous task whether or not a person speak their language. A person...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92039448087 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627586206897 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9263692402 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.533333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251655793482 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709565374403 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058235846909 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142100821057 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809329609365 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.