The qualities that make someone admirable
Admirable people are successful people and their behaviors influence our daily lives. They can be good examples for us to learn. In my view, optimism and humility are two important qualities that make a person admired.
Firstly, an optimist can inspire a positive person, so a person who should be admired must be optimistic. Being an optimist requires a sequence of positive concept that often sees the best everything. Optimistic people endure unimaginable suffering and still try to maintain a positive outlook on life. They have learned to consider hardships and challenges as motivation to strive. Because of this, optimists deserve admiration. They know who they are, what they think and what they want to do. They always choose to try instead of giving up.
Secondly, Humility is also an important quality that makes an admirable person. Humble people are people who understand and accept their abilities. With a full understanding of our strengths and weaknesses. They try to improve their abilities. They do not show off how talented they are, they just strive through each day to get better and better. Not even when they are greater than everybody else. They are engaging because they do not pretend they are perfect. They accept their limitations and focus on self-improvement.
To be an admirable person, it doesn't matter who you are but you have to have the necessary qualities. Optimism and humility drive us towards achieving a beautiful world and filling everyone's heart with love.
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Your essay eloquently…
Your essay eloquently highlights optimism and humility as essential qualities that define admirable individuals, emphasizing their positive impact on others. It effectively illustrates how these qualities inspire personal growth and contribute to a more compassionate society .
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 31, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ovement. To be an admirable person, it doesnt matter who you are but you have to have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1387755102 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75328435882 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.6154814231 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.95 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.25 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102972605369 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348417312585 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758507324719 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820927804834 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590666857628 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.64 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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