With the rapid advancement of communication technology, eg smart phones, tablets and other mobile devices, some people believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the time of the technology boom, mobile devices have certainly revolutionized communication with its cutting-edge and sustainable development. However, I believe entirely that the drawbacks outweigh the benefits.
On the one hand, with the thrills of technology, smartphones or tablets play an indispensable role in the way people contacting. The tendency of staying at home but using email to maintain and modify superbly job performances of several employees has increased dramatically, in lieu of working 8 hours a day at any institution. Furthermore, plenty of comforts of sending messages through social networking sites have assisted figures to keep in touch sustainably with friends and relatives. Without introducing restrictions on time or distance yet still providing adequate convenience, interacting using modern devices are going more and more viral.
On the other hand, people are becoming over-reliant on technological breakthroughs. There is no denying that this dependence has made it really difficult to engage face-to-face with others more regularly. In fact, the new way of communication has discouraged real interaction, as figures hardly hold a meeting twice or more a month. Accordingly, the opportunity to cement a strong relationship drops to a lower number. One more disadvantage is that once people are stuck behind mobile devices too much, this will carry more potential health risks. For example, their eyes can be damaged swiftly because of being glued to the screen, and a sedentary lifestyle can lead to being prone to obesity.
In general, despite the huge support of technological breakthroughs to stand people in good stead in communication, I would argue that the drawbacks are too crucial to be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rawbacks are too crucial to be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, however, if, really, so, still, for example, in fact, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50185873606 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28850701834 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657992565056 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4532609884 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.846153846 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171145680216 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575738408042 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490997574934 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102844566098 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535601719723 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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