Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Current studies show that criminal acts among teenagers are becoming more and more prevalent. According to psychology, the main reason for this is child neglect. This essay will argue why this statement is not accurate.
It is claimed by many people that the reason behind a teenager becoming a thug is because of parents not providing their children with proper emotional support. Many parents focus on providing financial support to their children and completely forget about the emotional support they need. Which causes them to be more violent.
The previous statement is not quite accurate because numerous children are given the support they need but despite that, they still become criminals. In my opinion, there are two main explanations for these criminal acts. To begin with, the thing that everyone completely forgets about is the children's environment. Falling in with bad friends can lure you into becoming a thug. I strongly believe that if it hadn't been for these youngster's friends, they wouldn't have gotten caught up in this lifestyle. Although some of them were given the emotional support they needed, they still ended up being criminals. The second reason is growing up in a violent household. Child intervention with violence causes them to bear a grudge against their parents, and then release it to the world. For further illustration, how can someone provide something he hadn't been given?
To sum up, I strongly disagree with child neglect being the main reason for violent crime among youngsters. This is because of the presence of other explanations. Youngsters still commit crimes despite their parents' way of upbringing.
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- The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999 and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999 67
- In recent years more and more people are choosing to read e books rather than paper books Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 61
- The charts show average level of participation in education and the highest education level of adults from 2000to 2010 in Singapore 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, still, then, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31578947368 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59976472798 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575187969925 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0068983561 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5555555556 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05555555556 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241342437688 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734363093824 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424949712804 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15224674872 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177472051717 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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