Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some psychologists say that the main reason for violent crime among teenagers is that children nowadays are not receiving the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. I think there are several reasons for this.
Parents are too busy to take care of their children all time. They provide a smartphone for them and let their kids do whatever they want with their spare time. This can lead the children to develop bad habits, live away from society, and only interact with the unrealistic world on their smartphones. As a result, they become selfish and easy to start a fight since they lack emotional support from parents and interactions with parents. Besides, teachers at school do not teach their students social and emotional skills such as loving nature, giving help to people who need them… Teachers are attending too much on the academic achievement of students. If their learners do well academically, they can have a better opportunity in their future career.
However, there are other reasons for young crime among teenagers. Firstly, some types of entertainment like TV, games, internet can affect children directly. They sometimes recommend bad advertisements and wake up viewers’ curiosity. Secondly, what types of friends that children communicate with also influence them. If those friends easily get fight with others, the children can become a person like that shortly.
To conclude, children can walk on the wrong path without parents’ attention, who supposed to provide them with necessary life skills, but some can actively get social and emotional learning by themselves and become a good citizen in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, i think, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24719101124 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64886432386 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602996254682 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2714268498 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.071428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288402935955 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104390618316 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978526135886 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208049657895 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130304686907 0.056905535591 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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