A recent newspaper article report that a 14-year-old boy who seriously destroyed his school got a punishment to clean streets instead of sent to the prison, do you think this is right? Or the young criminals should be sent to jail.
Discussing about the punishment of juvenile offenders is one of the controversial issues. Some people consider that juvenile offenders should have a chance to change by punishing to clean streets, while others think that juvenile delinquency should send to prisons. In my opinion, I would argue that young children should have different solutions to tackle this problems than spending them to jail.
It is clear that there are so many reasons behind not spending juvenile offenders to prison like adults. In the beginning, they are immature people so that the local community has no right to judge them by catching them to jail. According to conduct research studies, the researcher thinks that most children have characterize and awareness from their parents and if their parents regulate a lack of connecting between parents along with their children that can cause lead to their bad behavior. Therefore, the local government should give them to have opportunities to start again and helping them have a door to become a good citizen.
Furthermore, if they sent to prisons, they can easily effected from other criminal leading to these teenagers may become involved with gangs, although juvenile delinquency can become a person like criminals. Finally, their personality can lose job opportunities when they released.
In conclusion, there is e all reason as I mentioned above, I believe that there are many solutions to tackle this problem than spending juvenile offenders to prisons to punish them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28333333333 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74545078266 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8569601751 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.8 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10758732981 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447040010381 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318167309127 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685222529474 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352299608086 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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