A recent newspaper article report that a 14 year old boy who seriously destroyed his school got a punishment to clean streets instead of sent to the prison do you think this is right Or the young criminals should be sent to jail (500775)
Increasing punishment amongst the teenagers make them more cranky. However, offspring who commit crime should be treated very well with low level of punishment. Some measure can take to change their behavior and make them a good member of the society. This essay shall discuss behind some preferable solution to make them good person.
To commence with, offensive behavior of adolescent should treated in appropriate way, therefore he become a good person of the community. Moreover, if juvenile committed a crime he should be punished with no physical violent. To epitome, a boy who did fight with other student of the class, he should be punished like cleaning the classroom or stand out side of the class for full day. Furthermore, physical violent will make him more cranky and he might become criminal in the future.
Addictionally, adolescent can treat well if he received good guidance from their parents or teacher. If children did big crime like hurt someone very badly, then he should be send to rehabilitation center for some time. Moreover, people should explain them about aggressive behavior creats dangerous situation for them and how it completes their life. Besides, a child should be treated very well from their early age so that they learn respect and value of relationship. They can make a good society in the future and help to developed a healthy nation.
To close the discussion, juvenile who attempt crime should be treated with politeness, However, they must be punished with no physical violence and do not need to send in prison.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...ed like cleaning the classroom or stand out side of the class for full day. Furthermore,...
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Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sent'?
Suggestion: sent
...t someone very badly, then he should be send to rehabilitation center for some time....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98344370861 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62283637424 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566225165563 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8567839185 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324542251797 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101114141098 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.20417787029 0.0667982634062 306% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263345244844 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.355476179956 0.056905535591 625% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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