Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change their jobs To what extent do you agree or disagree

Changing a job is quite difficult for an individual. Some people think that changing a job several times is beneficial for them rather than staying at the same place for a longer period. I, agree with the give notion that people who work with the same organization get a higher chance of success.

To commence with, people who work in a big company for a longer time, obtain a higher level of success in their lives. Moreover, it provides them job satisfaction and a chance to get a promotion in the future. They not only earn money in the organization but also get admired by their superiors which gives them a sense of job fulfillment. To epitome, a person who works for several years with the same company, get chance for tremendous increment in his remuneration on time and a great amount of bonus. Furthermore, a person can achieve their goals and complete dreams on time.

Additionally, people who tend to change their jobs several times are more likely to ruin their resumes. Changing a job numerous times also creates a bad image in front of the interviewer or other people. Thus, people do not get a good amount of packages from the company as they know these types of people always work for a short time. Besides, people who change their duty in a short time, sometimes get stuck and do not get a job in some organizations. Therefore, working for a long time at the same place has a marvelous impact on individuals' lives.

To close the discussion, masses who change their jobs frequently are at risk to do not acquire a job in the future as they create a poor image in front of the organization.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58823529412 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65007630442 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498269896194 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.992510616 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7142857143 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344262136014 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138397570321 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990287011621 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23897117464 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061296568224 0.056905535591 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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