It is an undeniable fact that nowadays pupils delivered their plenty of time on other activities such as sports, social gathering and watching movies rather than paying more attention on their academic. This essay agree with the given notion and reason behind this phenomenon will be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.
Spending a time on other activities than studying actively is necessary? Certainly not. To embark with, spending time with peers and watching movies on Netflix is quite normal in this contemporary era. Pupils use to spend their time on the study and less active on social media, as technology was not so developed in earlier time. In addition to this, students are spending plethora of time on watching movies as it no benefits at all and it is a waste of time. To epitome, students in this digital era spending their much time on games such as pub g and free fire which is absolutely useless for them.
Further and even more importantly, if students use their time in study they get tremendous success at the end. They not only enhance their academic score significantly in the exam but also get chance to work with multinational corporations in the future with lucrative remuneration. Thus, it is an essential duty of the novice to study hard until their exam comes.
Nevertheless, we can not ignore flip side too that other activities such as gymnastics, social gathering and sports are also crucial for their marvelous advancement. One can get employment in army and police for because of their physical fitness, also get chance to serve the nation.
To recapitulate, student should spend their vast majority of time in their academic however, they must also have freedom to do extraordinary physical activity which is quite beneficial for them.
- Today more and more full time university students focus on other activities rather than spend a lot of time studying Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- A recent newspaper article report that a 14 year old boy who seriously destroyed his school got a punishment to clean streets instead of sent to the prison do you think this is right Or the young criminals should be sent to jail 73
- People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 56
- Online education is becoming more and more popular Some people claim that e learning has so many benefit that it will replace face to face education Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable Discuss both view and give your opinion 78
- Nowadays more people are choosing to live with their friends or alone rather than with their families this trend is likely to have a negative impact on community To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...normal in this contemporary era. Pupils use to spend their time on the study and le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03716216216 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74410642457 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9475159494 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282799855777 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111831406809 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977685655597 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153066177372 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715168043164 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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