Recent research has shown that media like the internet and TV have a greater influence over people's lives than politician.
In competitive era,internet and television acts as stepping stone to admire the behavior of individuals by telecasting various programs such as movies,soaps,reality shows and so on. However,public can not neglact the influence of politician persons who impress by giving mind blowing speech. This notion will analyse the reasons before giving a logical conclusion.
To commence with, the media use a plenty of ways to influence to masses. First and formost, youngsters mostly watch distinct kind of movies on television or by using internet on mobile phone or laptop and they mostly admire from famous persons, actors, actress by watching their personality, stuning life style living standard and so on. Younger follow them as a role model also try to become like their inspiration person. If these popular person do good things such as donate in charity, help needy persons or bad activities like smoking, drinking, violence behavior. These crazy people indulge these activities of their role model.
Secondly, when children watch movies or other programs then they choose their career by seeing a role of different professions such as teacher, doctor, lawyer and so on. Because they come to know about the importance of every profession. Quoting an example from personal experience that a larget number of masses are working on different sections by select their profession with help of media consequently, media has a great influence on society as compared to politician.
However, it is beyond doubt media plays a Cardinal to impress to community but politician is not at the back seat as these people give a very splendid speech in public by having more confidence, make eye contact. These politician people mostly target on their children owing to they easily agree with statement that's why parents do not give freedom to. to make their own decisions. For example that the prime minister of India Mr. Narinder modi always give lucrative speech so a lot of young people give more respect as a role model.
To Conclude, both aspects had an own Imperative but media plays act on towering point to wash individual's mind by presenting allure programs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19714285714 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79905085954 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611428571429 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5047410021 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6875 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140904924569 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433069786386 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369043971691 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706053884 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245888007845 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.