Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released.
Why is this the case?
What can be done to solve this problem?
Suggested by criminologists and experts that the number of repeat offenders is rising. There are a variety of explanations for this trend and several solutions could be adopted to alleviate the situation.
On the one hand, recidivism occurs after the prisoners are released for some reasons, chief of which is the insecurity in deterring and educating offenders to avoid illegal activities in the prisons. The rehabilitative measures, generally, are often adopted for the most lawbreakers to instill in them the grave consequences of their actions and gear them towards ethical behavior. However, to some particular individuals, those forms of deterrences are not sweeping enough to influence their mental determination to commit crime again. Corporal torture in jails or humiliation, for instance, could even intensify fued or have an adverse impact on their health instead of educational purposes. Consequently, during the reintegration process, the convicts might perpetuate crime as a form of revenge to the law system.
On the other hand, the authorities should take viable steps to tackle this problem. In an attempt to reduce crime incidence, stricter punishments must be administered to deliver tangible results. By doing so, the power of the judicial system and law enforcement could be reinforced and upholded to a higher level. For example, once the death penalty or life sentence is executed to a criminal, the other will subconsciously have a sense of fear and aware of their behaviours. In the meantime, the police department and federal agency should also dissuade potential criminals, which could directly result in a reduction in the volume of crime had the tendency of committing wrongdoings were eliminated early before any tragedies come.
To conclude, illegal activities are reoffended out of complex motives and steps should be taken immediately to ensure the order of society as well as the safety of the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, still, well, for example, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41118421053 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03809029523 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618421052632 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8654122345 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.538461538 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128709494791 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424661833199 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333220229367 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712768233772 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309575573277 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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