In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. Why are these changes happening? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?
In recent times, the roles and the structure of family have changed. In accordance with this statement, this essay will explain the contributing factors of this issue and also put forward a number of remedial measures in the following paragraphs.
In regard to the argument above, as we reside in the temporary era, we are unable to avoid several alterations which might happen into our life, particularly, the changes which was discussed in the previous paragraph. Furthermore, I firmly believe that there are two causative factors of this issue. It, first and foremost, is caused by the enhancement of globalisation, in which in the end, this circumstance insists people to alter various common activities in earlier times in order to be able to survive and continue their life properly. Second but not less crucial, it, moreover, is produced by the lack of incomes which countless individuals are capable of obtaining.
Regarding the counter measures of this tribulation, the authority in every nation, firstly, has to render numerous aid for their economically deprived society. Secondly, the bureaucrat in each state, additionally, has to create a minimum wage which every individual are capable of acquiring, at least, it is supposed to be able to cover their daily needs.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that in order to minimize the improvement number of this issue, all government in every country across the globe has to make this regulation to be happened sooner. Thus, we, as a part of the society in the nation, have to fully support our government endeavours in order to create fewer negative outcomes in the end.
- Line graph : movie ticket sales by genre (1980 – 2010). 72
- International travel is becoming cheaper, and more and more countries open their door and with more and more tourists.Do the advantages of the increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages? 67
- Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical service should not be run by profit-making companies do the advantages of private health care outweight the disadvantages. 47
- The maps : the plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment. 73
- Bar Chart : The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, at least, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08518518519 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88838789578 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603703703704 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3768676488 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.3 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0662697475387 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349993617201 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718801302889 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0405568073925 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356264492293 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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