In recent years, the structure of a family and the role of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge
or experience.
At the moment, family changes a lot in structure and the role of its member are gradually changing. I strongly suppose that this will have a lot of advantages. This essay will illustrate the benefit and the disadvantages for this view.
Firstly, the breadwinner in a family is no longer belonging to men. This will make men have less pressure for the family. For instance, mother can easily get well-paid jobs so that they can deal with the economical problem in the family. Furthermore, the changes in structure in a family mean that they don't have to live with other relatives. For example, people now perfer to live in a nuclear family so that they don't have to care much about their flesh and blood.
Secondly, they can share the work with each others. This will make a balance between man and woman because they could know how to do all of these work properly. This changes can make them more focus on what they want to do. They don't have to do their responsibility anymore. For instance, a husband can do some housework like cooking, cleaning while a wife could do some physical activities such as playing some sport games, cycling.
Lastly, this can have some disadvantages. Some countries that their lives have affected about the traditional rules like some Asia countries including Vietnam . It may hard to changes their routines without criticize. For instance, some jobs that are really high well-paid won't accepted woman to do.
In conclusion, these changes will have pros and cons. The advantages that they can easily to share their work and less pressure. The disadvantages that they could be criticized by some individuals because of their traditional. From my view, I strongly belive that the benefits will outweigh the disavantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64833779509 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9273496739 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4285714286 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177561223802 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628982267514 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667076211426 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109458983558 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269102843286 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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