In recent years, the structure of a family and the role of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes that occur? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
It is true that the modern life has brought about a number of significant changes in the structure of a family and the roles of its members. there are several changes regarding family's organisation and members' role that have taken place, and I believe this tendency can be seen as a progress.
These days, families have experieced two main changes compared to the past. Fristly, a nuclear family now can have more than one breadwinner, which was once considered men's work. In fact, the rising cost of living has meant that only few jobs can secure the stability of single-earner families, which forces both parents to be the finacial supporters. Secondly, parental roles in families have been exchanged as equal rigts movements have made great progress. Women now can have equal opportunities to access education and pursue their careers. Likewise, men share a common interest in taking responsibility for the household chores and the childcare, which are typically considered femine. They do the washing up , the cooking even better than their wife.
I consider this tendency as a positive development. If both parents can become beadwinners, the fiancial condition of a family will be stable. Families with double income can invest more in eduacation as well as well-being of thei children. This will improve the life chances and choices of those children if there is enoungh money to finance later university studies. From another angle , it is an upward step that parents have freedom to make a wise and proper decisiuon about which parental roles each partner takes, according to what they like and have strength at
In conclusion, althought there are several changes in the family's hierarchy and members' responsibilities , I still believe that this trend might have good impacts on society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, well, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13993174061 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75883433902 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610921501706 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.0322288767 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170487205034 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618892617128 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672864977521 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126575029444 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734084948822 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.