Some people think that studying from the past offers no benefits to today’s life, while others think that history is a valuable source of information. Disciuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people think that there would be no practical value to study from the past. However, in my opinion history still plays a vital role in our present life.
On the one hand, it is understandable why many people think it is pointless to study from the past. First, the knowledge acquired from learning about what happened in the past can hardly be applied in real-life situations. Therefore, many individuals place on emphasis on science or technology rather than paying too much attention on something that brings no practical benifits to the present or future. Second, there is no guarantee of the accuracy of the information in the history textbooks as each histiorical event is interpreted in different ways based on different facts and perspectives. This might give learners misleading perception and greatly damge people’s culture and religion.
On the other hand , I still side with those who think that history plays an essential part in our present life. Studying about the past events fosters a sense of belonging and patriotism in each individual. For instance, by learning history, most Vietnamese students have a through insight into how their forefathers made sacrifices to defend their land against outside instruders and reclaim sovereignity. As a result, those students will take pride in their origin and treasure the liberty they enjoy today. Addtionally, history also teach us precious lessons about the mistakes made in the past. With a great deal of knowledge acquired from studying what happened in the past, people will have the ability to avoid similar faults in the future
In conclusion, while many people think that it is useless to study from the past events I still believe that learning history brings about a lot of benifits to human’s present life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15068493151 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75737926257 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571917808219 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3092071879 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292137877098 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10287385255 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082052779394 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210958384072 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486015293203 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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