Recycling is now an essential measure: it is time for everyone in society to become more responsible towards the environment.
To what extent do you agree of disagree with this statement?
It is a well known fact that nowadays a vast majority of production is inextricably linked with environmental pollution. There are known to be a lot of outstanding methods to improve and secure the environment and one of these methods is recycling. For many individuals recycling is a significantly important step in saving nature as well as one of the easiest ways in comparison with others. However, I partly agree with the statement that everyone in society has to be concerned about being a participant in the recycling process.
On the one hand, there are some explicit assertions that recycling may have harmful effects not only for the environment but also for individuals' health. First of all, some toxic substances can survive after the recycling process and become a part of stuff that might be a part of our daily life. For example, parts of trash ,which contain poisonous elements, can be turned into a water bottle and these venomous elements can be a cause of serious disease. In addition to this, the recycling process requires special technologies that can also create waste and emission. Finally, according to the current research the most types of plastic, which is mainly involved in the recycling, can not be recycled for creation of necessary things.
Despite those said disadvantages, recycling is still one of the most easily-accessible and conventional ways of environmental improvements. Nowadays, humankind starts to realize that natural resources have been utilized in enormously large portions, so shortage of resources becomes a serious problem. But the remarkable feature of recycling is production of energy using already utilized stuff. Next, the amazing result of recycling is a reducing the pollution level of air, water, and soil.
In conclusion, while various arguments have been mentioned, it seems to me that it is necessary to know what kind of stuff can be recycled to avoid sorrowful cases related to environmental and human safety.
- Some people believe that libraries should be funded while others think that they are useless as we have the Internet Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- The map below shows the present and proposed facilities of a university and the pie charts compare the percentages of engineering and medical students 72
- The car is possibly the most convenient and popular way of getting from A to B However due to its impact on the environment and the risk it poses to pedestrians and motorists goverments should take urgent steps to reduce our dependency on this mode of tra 84
- Modern technology is changing our world This has advantages such as bringing people closer together throught communication It also has disadvantages such as destroying the difference between cultures To what extent do you agree or disagree with this state 89
- The amount of sport shown on television every week has increased significantly and this is having impact on live sports events Do you think the benefits of having more televised sport are greater than the disadvantages 80
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, still, well, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20376175549 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02798599848 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570532915361 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6111331264 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.571428571 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161973079569 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571036902514 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434987284491 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906372095193 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437454716091 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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