Research shows that business meetings discussions and training are happening online nowadays Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages

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Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the frequency of organizing virtual conferences and drills is augurating, which presents the corporates with both drawbacks and exploitable benefits. From my perspective, while there exists several insidious problems, this tendency is a positive improvisation for the businesses .
On the one hand, the online operation of collective activities can be disadvantageous for the employees. To commence with, such incidents as the disconnection and blackout or malfunctioned electronic appliances are commonplace, preventing the staffs’ participating and updating information. This dependency on access to the network will underlie the deterioration in the overall performance since it is problematic for members with insufficient knowledge to cooperate and acclimatize to the company’s developmental direction. The second disadvantage is that the incidence of distraction and ineffective discussions can increase significantly. In other words, the temptation of digital entertainment and social medias is ubiquitous, enticing the employees into indulgence and disengagement from the ongoing appointment. As a repercussion, misheard or deficient information consumption will constitute misbehaviors and misled progress. For instance, a research by Stanford into several businesses demonstrates that 50% of the staffs are preoccupied by other activities during Zoom meetings.
On the other hand, the flexibility of this approach offers people numerous justifiable advantages. Firstly and most importantly, with the connection to Internet, the employees can attend the programmes on schedule at any location, especially at the comfort of their accomodations. This “anywhere” characteristic relegates the necessity for commuting, thus mitigating the expenditure and time for transportation, facilitating more opportunites for relaxation and other productive activities. As a corollary, this will increase the job satisfaction amongst employees, encouraging them to perform more efficiently and elevating their fidelity. Moreover, this application of telecommuting will consitute a more inclusive workplace for every participant regardless of their geographical distance. Secondly, video conferences will economize on tremendous expenses of operating the offices. To put it another way, such systems as air-ventilation, computer network, electrical appliances, etc... require tremendous finance to function which can otherwise be reinvested in business and faculty development or researches with the emergence of online activities. For example, the contemporary reports indicate that the financial burden has diminished considerably for businesses since they organized everything through Internet. Simultaneously, the companies also witness a reduction in working duration as a result of elevated productivity across the organizations.
In conclusion, while online meetings and training are occasionally troublesome, they can be significantly lucrative for the corporates and beneficial for the employees. Therefore, the perceptive adoption of these technologies will generate numerous benefits for the whole company both individually and collectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 33.0 8.3376753507 396% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2745.0 1615.20841683 170% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 6.47405660377 5.12529762239 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.66043089339 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617924528302 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 872.1 506.74238477 172% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9550809028 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.714285714 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1904761905 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09523809524 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.088749934845 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268406178489 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417975970581 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566732381026 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242431236483 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 8.88 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.25 12.4159519038 163% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.74 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 191.0 78.4519038076 243% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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