Responsible tourist means that people should preserve both environment and culture when visiting another place. Some people say that is impossible to be 'responsible tourist' .To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Due to the improving living condition, traveling has become a major way for modern people to entertainment during their leisure time. However, it is tourists’ behavior that determine whether they can be responsible during their vacation.Even though it is hard to be a well-behaved tourist,I still agree with this opinion that visitors should undertake the obligations to preserve environment and carry forward local culture because these are the basic responsibility for every single citizen.
On the one hand, there are some objective reasons causing unintentional behavior which violate the local customs.To begin with, some of sightseers may generate a large amount of garbage during their trip because those visitors lack the environmental-friendly awareness. Disposable products, for example, which can be seen everywhere in tourist attractions, are left by those visitors without green consciousness, definitely polluting local environment and posing heavy burden of the local environment. Apart from local environment deterioration, there are some misbehave caused by ignorance of local customs and culture, which can explain why it seems to be impossible for a tourist to behave responsibly.When travelers visit some countries or area with little-known local custom and ethnic culture, they may behave improperly and be misunderstood by local people due to the lack of knowledge of those particular culture. Therefore, it seems very difficult to be a responsible tourist.
On the other hand,I would argue that being a liable visitor is the foundational obligation when people on their holiday.Advocates of this hold the opinion that travelers could raise their eco- friendly awareness of environment. By that I mean, reducing the use of disposable products, carrying rubbish bags with them, and being quiet in tourists attractions are possibly effective ways in some extent to relieve local environment pressure caused by sightseers.In addition, doing some preparation to know more about local culture in advance can reduce the culture conflicts to a large extent. Good cases in point is searching the information on the web or consulting tour guide before we start our trip as it can help tourists know more deeply about local manners and customs, and thus avoid the unnecessary culture shocks, which are good ways for visitors to behave well and be responsible tourists.
Overall,I admit that being a responsible tourists is difficult, but there are still some practical measures which can be done to remit the dilemma.High quality is to our society what perfume is to a flower , and it can help the society function better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for example, i mean, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2234.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47549019608 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16966050044 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546568627451 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.785261589 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 223.4 106.682146367 209% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.8 20.7667163134 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265992808351 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114505679474 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584401225648 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171694127844 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279802476197 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.8 13.0946893788 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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