Restricting air travel is the only way to prevent air pollution. Do you agree?
It is generally believed that the best feasible solution to the air-polluted prevention is the limitation of air travel industry. Despite this, I completely believe that there are more major contributors to the air pollution than air travel.
The first reason in favor of my argument is that air travel industry is not the main pollutant. Despite some emissions from various daily flights, the amount of harmful gas is negligible and could not have devastating effects on the air quality. In comparison with the polluted gas emitted from means of transportation such as buses, cars and factories, air travel only plays a minor role in affecting the atmosphere. Such uncontrolled manufacturing and purchasing vehicles as well as the reliance on fossil fuels are the major causes of considerable influencing the air quality.
Another reason supporting my view is that the limitation of daily flights would be a barrier to tourism development. In fact, most tourists would be less likely to travel to a foreign country having strict rules and restricted flights. Foreign currency would be limited and tourist attractions lose monthly revenue. Besides that, import and export of goods would be inconvenient for ships, leading to scarce foreign products being not available in local area. These two factors result in the economic crisis and slow down development nation but not resolving the polluted air issue.
In conclusion, restricting air travel would not be a cost-efficient and workable approach to improve the air quality. Moreover, this policy from the authorities would exert adverse effects on the national economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 249, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...astating effects on the air quality. In comparison with the polluted gas emitted from mean...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32295719844 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91909716407 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607003891051 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7431555791 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.230769231 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281664726995 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108857792975 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998947750451 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192440848555 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893086496741 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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