The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of modern lifestyle. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Lifestyle of people is changing rapidly and along with that people’s eating habits and food choices are also changing. Currently, fast food is gaining popularity among every age groups because of its flexibility with modern lifestyle. There are several benefits of consuming these foods. I presume that disadvantages of this trend outweigh advantages. Both merits and demerits of this eating habit are justified in the ensuing paragraphs.
Discussing the merits, the foremost one is that it requires less time to get prepared. In addition, majority of fast-food items are readily available in the market, which makes it easy to prepare and less time consuming. Moreover, the price of these food items is very less comparing to the traditional food items. For instance, Burger and hotdog are available in half price than full Indian traditional snacks. Likewise, fast-foods have provided diversity in eating habits; nowadays, people are including fast-foods in their dinner and lunch menu. Also, these food items are becoming famous in street food marked and due to this several individuals are getting employment.
However, I would not overlook the darker side of this swing. The first and foremost negative is that it is not healthy comparing to the traditional food. To add on, majority of convenient foods are half cooked and this may cause problems with the digestion system. For an illustration, food poisoning is common these days, which might be due to fast-foods. Similarly, these food items are high in cholesterol, which is the major source of causing heart attacks. Furthermore, several fast-food stalls or restaurants are not hygienic.
To conclude, it can be stated that currently craze of consuming fast food is emerging rapidly due to its properties, such as less time consumption, low price and diversity. However, this swing has more cons because it is not healthy and several problems can occur such as, diarrhoea, vomiting and in long term heart attack too. So, people should adapt healthy eating style to overcome these problems in future.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-02-04 | Kaishal Ozarker | 73 | view |
- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the cast Do you think this is a positive or negative situation 67
- The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of modern lifestyle What are the advantages of this trend Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages 73
- Nowadays a lot of buildings such as offices and schools are now being built with an open plan design Why is that Do you see this as a positive or negative 73
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- The advances in air travel are focused only in first class and this seems to have left others with no benefits at all Do you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 400, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...eating style to overcome these problems in future.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, look, may, moreover, similarly, so, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26363636364 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71476762708 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557575757576 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6797571698 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.85 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18118956215 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605939162329 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579592862252 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121242916695 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678729582755 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.