rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas.
What problems can this cause?
How might these problems be reduced?
Rise in the standard of Living in a country depends on whether that country is developed and organized or not. If a country is modern and cultured, it really doesn’t matter which part of it you are living in. In this essay, I will discuss the ensuing problems and the related solutions.
It can cause rural areas to lose its charm of living and be a worse place to live for the other people of that country. It also can make that country weaker overall because a strong country is a country that all parts of it are developed and organized. It can also cause a devastating discrimination among the people of that country and the people of countryside will be feeling they are ignored or snubbed by the government and cities therefore their belief in the government and their unity will dropped significantly.
There are several solutions for this issue, one of them is that the government can observe the economic and social situation very accurately and prepare or execute a series of beneficial plans in order to boost the economy and the standards of living for the people of rural areas. To explain more it means that those plans are the distribution of new technologies and devices to the universities and schools of rural regions and the investment in their agriculture and modernizing their transfer system. It can also try to seek help from the people of countryside and attempts to get them involved in social and economic projects and encourage them to empower the condition of their hometown.
In conclusion, rise in the standard of living will always cause a series of problems and negative effects but always there are a number of efficient solutions for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79655172414 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70600907921 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479310344828 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.7439296173 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.1 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254975730831 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105475052356 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576785173752 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159642787897 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508977111362 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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