Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Doing study in schools is considered as a paramount part of human lives .In the present era, its assert that learning centeres are less essential for pupils, as offsprings already has alot of knowledge due to internet at their homes . I am totally disagree with this statement owing to some reasons. which I will specify in upcoming paragraphs
To embark upon , by having online training regarding education .children can become careless towards their subjects and may take interest in unnecessary advertisements for instance while scrolling the internet there are numbers of advertisements on games , cartoon movies , toys and many more. Moreover, online studies are different to understand as compare to offline tuitions .Thus , pupils may become weaker in studies which can put adverse effect on their cognitive and intellectual skills.
In addition to this, internet tuitions may get health disease namely eye problems , heart disease as offsprings become lazy to excessivuse of internet .furthermore , study from internet can not give practical skills about art and craft . Hence, students will fade away from creativity which will turn them into bookworm.
After mulling over the topic , in my opinion . No matter how much information internet can give , online knowledge can not take the place of schools as internet have not practical and creativity skills.
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- Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet and they can study just as well at home To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people feel that boarding schools where students or pupils live at the school during the term are an excellent option for children while other people disagree for a number of reasons Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43396226415 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79990175149 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683962264151 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.949205312 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.375 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221659594798 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840118162506 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764407543115 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131712589439 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470126611963 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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