Scientific research are carried and controlled by governments rather than private companies.Do you agree or disagreeGive an example from your knowledge

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Scientific research are carried and controlled by governments rather than private companies.
Do you agree or disagree
Give an example from your knowledge

Some argue, scientific research are maintained by governments while, others argue that private companies should be taking the initiative. However,I completely agree that private companies needs to take over the government, as it is more inclined due to its achievement in scientific and technological aspects.

Firstly,in this contemporary world scientists takes long timer than to achieve. Government, although provides equipment's to scientists laboratory facilities,goods and services they provide are of low cost which cannot be performed with. For instance,developing countries have the issue with the government, because it supplies the vital requirements in a low cost to save budget. Although their instance where government has taken scientific research way ahead but the drawbacks cannot be neglected.

On the other hand,scientists approach for private companies to get financial resources and which companies get recognition. Scientific experiments are need be held in proper manner,the best way is to give good infrastructure and facilities. To delineate an example, robotics in medical fields are developing due to private sectors especially in surgeries. The artificial intelligence and the technological up-gradation from generations are conducted by private companies. The advancement in field of science like microprocessor and virtual glass are by artificial intelligence, this leading our future generation to be a better place

In conclusion,Though there is difference in working condition of both sectors, than working in a different zones they can work together for betterment of future.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97413793103 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54685597072 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650862068966 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8812512495 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152397322486 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599941389444 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048345627616 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841831058517 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482615513134 0.056905535591 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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