Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
there are different views about whether governments should conduct scientific studies or companies. While some individuals are in favour of the authorities, I agree with the view that not only governments but businesses need to be in charge of carrying out these studies.
On the one hand, it is obvious that conducting the research including both basic and practical scientific studies should be responsible for governments. This is because the governments of different countries can easily collaborate with each other, they may be able to conduct studies on a large scale, which require a large investment. For instance, the active collaboration strategy between the UK and the EU is to deal with climate change, infectious diseases in people or animals and this will help scientists across countries can resolve these complex global issues. Another reason for this is that governments often tend to pay attention to research areas that can benefit society as a whole. Studies related to environmental issues and crime rates Are great examples.
On the other hand, I concur with those who argue that enterprises play such a vital role in conducting practical scientific research. Firstly, the result of these researches will generate profits and also is the top priority of each company, which will encourage enterprises to make an effort to conduct research more quickly and more efficiently. For example, a company, like Teva has been carrying out extensive research to solve generic drug problem to provide them for patients, resulting in a decrease in the cost of out-of-pocket patients. Secondly, when private companies take part in investing in research fields, the constraint of finance on government’s budget will be relieved, helping government have more cash to spend on other main areas such as infrastructure or health and medical services. This might lead to improvement in the quality of life of the whole community.
In conclusion, although I strongly believe that conducting research activities is the primary duty of governments, I would argue that businesses should involve in these activities
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... to environmental issues and crime rates Are great examples. On the other hand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37125748503 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00520661647 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586826347305 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.3066414362 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227853871752 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797148545104 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616452516044 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143445302761 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728756317931 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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