Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that scientific research should be conducted and managed by governments than performed by corporations. This essay totally agrees with this statement because only governments have enough resources to support these projects to achieve reliable outcomes and these results should be controlled to prevent the misuse of them.
Undertaking a scientific study or project will require a huge amount of time, money and knowledge of scientists. To achieve the best results, these experiments should be conducted in high standard labs by qualified scientists with sufficient budgets provided. These strict requirements are only available in the universities, research centers funded by governments. If these researches are carried out by corporations who are primarily driven by their profits, the results can be modified or manipulated to maximize profits, and it can affect seriously to society. For example, thalidomide, a drug developed by a German company, had been used widely by many pregnant women around the world, resulting in the birth of thousands of malformed children because they did not conduct the appropriate number of trials due to the limited budget.
Another reason why research on science should be funded and controlled by states is that the outcomes of many projects could have a huge influence on humanity or society. Therefore, these experiments should be performed and administered the applications properly to avoid using them for incorrect purposes. If private companies involve in these studies, the outcomes can not be kept confidential or might be used in commercial manners that are beneficial for corporations only. Moreover, some of the results might be used by illegal organizations such as terrorists against innocent people. For instance, research on chemical warfare agents should be strictly undertaken and managed by authorities only because any terrorist organization can create easily a deadly attack to a massive of people by these chemicals in a very short time.
In conclusion, governments should fund and manage scientific studies completely because they have the best ability to carry out and control their applications to benefit human
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 489, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ficial for corporations only. Moreover, some of the results might be used by illegal organi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55654761905 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01878889298 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568452380952 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4833229734 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.615384615 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259166740558 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991203464689 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076275547855 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179875629791 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549236765374 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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