Scientific inventions play an important role in modern society and are vital for our sustainability, thus many people argue that the government should control the entire research. However, I believe should not limit the opportunity to the governments only.
First of all, there are many advantages if the researches are carried out by government agencies only. Such as all government bodies are controlled by many national regulations because of this the researchers will stick to the rules. Secondly, these research facilities won't act against national interests. In addition, as these facilities are subsidised by the government the products will be available for the benefit of the public. For example, a heart valve developed by the government research facility in Kerala is one of the cheapest options available for the citizens.
On the other hand, the private sector's research facilities play a vital role in the development of many products that necessary for our daily life. One clear example, mosquito repellent developed by the company called ''GoodNight" is one of the common product that every household have. Many drugs that we use nowadays are the contribution of the private sectors. Moreover, the private sector doesn't be a burden for the governments. Further, these private sectors able to co-operate with other international companies and organisations this will give them leverage to hire or get the latest technologies or personals from all over the world. Such as, many vaccines for the Covid 19 viruses are developed by the private sector with multi-national collaboration.
To encapsulate, both private and government research facilities are important for our society thus the scientific researches should not limit to governments only.
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- In many parts of the world water sources are becoming more polluted discuss the problems and the solutions 73
- With recent developments in technology like e books some people feel that printed media like books newspapers and magazines will soon be a thing of the past Other feel that these form of media will never disappear What is your opinion 73
- People are becoming more and more sugar based drinks Why What can be done to reduce sugary drink consumption 78
- Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies Do you agree or disagree 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in addition, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62081784387 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25706993803 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546468401487 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4701585564 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.307692308 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248197173897 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986320027351 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062606634333 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178251388245 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495230490757 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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