People have different views about how to attain a successful career. While some believe the higher study is the key to success and, others believe getting employed straight after school is the best way. In my opinion, I argue that a college or university degree is more desirable.
On the one hand, getting a job after school will provide many advantages to the young person, such as financial freedom is one of the main aspects, as he or she is the earning member of the society they have the freedom to spend their money. Job experience is one another advantage of early employment, as they know how to do their job and know how the organisation function they may able to advance in their career better than a newly graduated. Also, they will be free from the debt accumulated by the university education and could use their income towards savings rather than paying off the student loan.
On the other hand, there are plenty of advantages a university education could provide to its pupil. First of all, a properly structured college education will help the student to widen their knowledge not only in their field of study but all so towards the world. Another leverage is many organizations give weightage to candidates with graduation. Also, jobs that legally require a professional degree such as medical, judiciary professionals thus it is impossible for a person without qualification enters to these careers. Finally a university-educated professional could get promotions quicker than one without it.
To recapitulate, the advantages of entering a career early without a university degree is not always a practical solution for successful career growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 528, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... qualification enters to these careers. Finally a university-educated professional coul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, so, thus, while, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19188191882 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08555493042 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590405904059 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4544776184 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272544939699 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993538993879 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110420489815 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189951018065 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169827252276 0.056905535591 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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