Family is an integral and essential part of human being, although, some individuals choose to live alone in some part of the world. which has some advantages and disadvantages. However, I argue that this is a positive trend.
The disadvantages of whoever chooses to live alone are disturbing the customs of the society which we been following since the formation of the human being. Some other disadvantages can be categorised into physical, psychological and economic. An example of financial drawbacks is the cost of living that have to entirely bare by the individual himself. hence if something happens to the income could directly jeopardise the wellbeing of the person. A study conducted by the society of psychologist in New Zealand published its result in 2011 revealed that 64 per cent of people living alone depicts some sort of psychological instabilities as a result of lack of emotional support.
The advantages of a loner are complete freedom in decision making, He can live however he wants in his habitat. People with some sort of psychiatric conditions could be better with live by themself as there is no one else is there to judge them. one clear example is a person with hoarding condition will be more comfortable living alone as he can have more space for himself. Furthermore, more financial freedom is another advantage as he doesn't have to support any other members.
To recapitulate, people can reap some benefits from individual life regarding personal development and economic status. Nevertheless, I firmly hold the view that this can make a positive impact on their lives in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, sort of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26436781609 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28152364162 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5845333299 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237571575081 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078609826578 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427873248328 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150937359315 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336021881354 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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